I think the headings for the poster are a little bit too small, it will be more 'eye-grabbing' with bigger headings.
I like the bubble diagram analysis, good human anatomy analysis but wasnt quite sure what is happening to diagrams on the bottom left corner..
The design concept's drawing are too light, maybe by increasing the contrast of the drawings in photoshop may bring the sketches to life a bit.. The collage image and perspective view should be improved..
On the synthesis, good section and plan drawings. However, the 3 photos dont actually show much. Since people can see all these images by observing the model, there is no point to actually put in shots of model picture into the poster. Unless it's to show a collage or material rendering.
Hopefully that helps and motivated you! Good luck for the next project! Dang! ;D
I would have to agree with David about the headings on your posters, they seem to be floating in space a bit and the size of them does not make them easily readable.
I think one of the things that I have noticed about the final presentation is that your background on the poster actually detracts from your other drawings. It is emphasised a bit too much, this could be what is making your drawings less readable.
Again David has picked up an important point in the pictures of your model. If you included these because your not confident in another representation of a 3D view, providing a background of the actual site would help give them more meaning. They would not just be there, there would be a point to their inclusion.
Other than these few points, good job Dang.
Hope these comments are useful to take forward into the next project. Liz
David, the diagrams on the bottom left corner was the drawing to understand the concept of minimal space.
Basiclly, it shows a man stand in nature without a columns beside him, without a piece of tiles above him and with a windoew in front of him.at this moment,it can be consider as a unbounded space. to feel space he have to build something. for example, to create a window to have mountain view, so he can get connect with those mountains.
here just my little understand of space. there are many archtects and philosopher did lots of work about how do their understanding of spaces. i found it was interesting, hope learn more in the future study
Liz, thanks for ur comments! put ur design earlier next time, so we can enjoy ur design and leave some comments
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I think the headings for the poster are a little bit too small, it will be more 'eye-grabbing' with bigger headings.
I like the bubble diagram analysis, good human anatomy analysis but wasnt quite sure what is happening to diagrams on the bottom left corner..
The design concept's drawing are too light, maybe by increasing the contrast of the drawings in photoshop may bring the sketches to life a bit.. The collage image and perspective view should be improved..
On the synthesis, good section and plan drawings. However, the 3 photos dont actually show much. Since people can see all these images by observing the model, there is no point to actually put in shots of model picture into the poster. Unless it's to show a collage or material rendering.
Hopefully that helps and motivated you! Good luck for the next project! Dang! ;D
i'll keep it in mind
thanks
hey dangdang,
I would have to agree with David about the headings on your posters, they seem to be floating in space a bit and the size of them does not make them easily readable.
I think one of the things that I have noticed about the final presentation is that your background on the poster actually detracts from your other drawings. It is emphasised a bit too much, this could be what is making your drawings less readable.
Again David has picked up an important point in the pictures of your model. If you included these because your not confident in another representation of a 3D view, providing a background of the actual site would help give them more meaning. They would not just be there, there would be a point to their inclusion.
Other than these few points, good job Dang.
Hope these comments are useful to take forward into the next project. Liz
David,
the diagrams on the bottom left corner was the drawing to understand the concept of minimal space.
Basiclly, it shows a man stand in nature without a columns beside him, without a piece of tiles above him and with a windoew in front of him.at this moment,it can be consider as a unbounded space. to feel space he have to build something. for example, to create a window to have mountain view, so he can get connect with those mountains.
here just my little understand of space. there are many archtects and philosopher did lots of work about how do their understanding of spaces.
i found it was interesting, hope learn more in the future study
Liz, thanks for ur comments!
put ur design earlier next time, so we can enjoy ur design and leave some comments
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