I really like the way you presented on the bottom of each poster, the steps on how your minima is to be mounted on the site.
But I think there are too many thumbnail diagrams on the 2nd poster which is hard to read, maybe you can improve it by cropping the necessary ones and put them all together..and the hand written words can hardly be read as well, maybe erasing them and add some text in photoshop may tidy up the poster ;)
The sections and plans are very hard to read as well, by looking at the plan and section themselve without refering to the persective view, i cant actually tell what is it. I think by drawing different line weight, drop a few colour and texture to the structure components or even add a human figure in it to immediately show the scale of you design.
Well, thats the things that i reckon should have done better in this project. Hope you can do better for your next project! =)
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I really like the way you presented on the bottom of each poster, the steps on how your minima is to be mounted on the site.
But I think there are too many thumbnail diagrams on the 2nd poster which is hard to read, maybe you can improve it by cropping the necessary ones and put them all together..and the hand written words can hardly be read as well, maybe erasing them and add some text in photoshop may tidy up the poster ;)
The sections and plans are very hard to read as well, by looking at the plan and section themselve without refering to the persective view, i cant actually tell what is it. I think by drawing different line weight, drop a few colour and texture to the structure components or even add a human figure in it to immediately show the scale of you design.
Well, thats the things that i reckon should have done better in this project. Hope you can do better for your next project! =)
By: David Chung
hey David
Thank you heaps for you comments, they are very insightful and I'm certain will help me improve my presentation and boost my mark.
Liz
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